Introductory Paragraph Response

In reading the introductory paragraph regarding distracted driving, it is plain to see that distracted driving is a severe issue that needs to be addressed immediately. The paragraph suggests that distracted driving is more of a problem among teens due to their inexperience with operating motor vehicles. If I were to create an outline detailing this argument, I would definitely refer to the data to show how much of a problem this issue is among teenagers. Many teens text and drive so I would definitely utilize some data that speaks to that aspect of distracted driving. I would also bring in information regarding other forms of distraction such as music. In furthering this argument, I believe that referencing the data is key, because so many Americans are aware of this problem but do not understand how severe it truly is.

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One response to “Introductory Paragraph Response

  1. Outline
    -Introduction ( Strong first and last sentence with CLEAR argument and topic)
    -First Paragraph (Talk about which studies supported your stance that GM food has caused the increase in cancer, atleast partially)
    -Next Paragraph (Give a counter-argument and use it to strengthen your argument by tearing it to shreds)
    – Conclusion (Conclude by leaving reader with firm understanding of what you believe)

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